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Diamonds Sample Spread 01-02 by ~spoonbard:iconspoonbard:

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Submitted: February 16, 2007
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Here is the first double-spread from the sample pages I'm producing for 'Deck', the series of short stories that ~kandinsky-prince and I are working on at the moment.
This particular story is 'Diamonds' (I produced a concept image for it earlier).
Words and story by ~kandinsky-prince
Images by moi.

I'll be interested to hear if anyone has any suggestions about the lettering? I'm not 100% happy with the glow surrounding the text. I tried sans-glow but it's not visible enough, and a straight stroke looks far too harsh. Hum.
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~galsan:icongalsan: Feb 16, 2007, 12:08:57 PM
ahh looks very interesting
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~graphicgravy:icongraphicgravy: Feb 16, 2007, 12:12:10 PM
I think the lettering looks great...sorry I know you are looking for some help with them, but I like it. It makes it dream-like. I just have one minor spelling critique...'received' at the end is spelled wrong...other than that, great work!
~spoonbard:iconspoonbard: Feb 16, 2007, 12:15:16 PM
Ah! Thanks for pointing that out ^^; I'm terrible with my i's and e's.
:) Glad you like the text though! Thanks for the comment.
=westernphilosopher:iconwesternphilosopher: Feb 16, 2007, 12:19:20 PM
This is great, i love the dreamy quality and flow... it feels like a memory.

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*zaradei:iconzaradei: Feb 16, 2007, 12:24:47 PM
It is great.. it does tell the story. Drawing and color are perfect. But I agree the letter is not as good as can be... I am sorry I have no suggestions..
~sherrelle:iconsherrelle: Feb 16, 2007, 12:38:07 PM
Aw, seems so sad.. I think the lettering adds affect to it, you knowm fits in well with the comic.
So pretty~
~Swazzo-mk2:iconSwazzo-mk2: Feb 16, 2007, 12:42:18 PM
mahhh!!!! yr layouts are awesome.

sweet work man. Oh, finally saw the Rising Stars of Manga with yr lil' story. Well deserved win man (:
~graphicgravy:icongraphicgravy: Feb 16, 2007, 12:50:09 PM
Sorry I'm kind of a grammar nerd...I can't help but notice spelling mistakes! :P I really look forward to the rest of your story!!
=MangakaMaiden:iconMangakaMaiden: Feb 16, 2007, 12:55:10 PM
I love surreal style for layouts, its really cool.

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*rukiaprincess:iconrukiaprincess: Feb 16, 2007, 1:06:03 PM
INCREDIBLE...I bow to your comick-y goodness.

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