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Diamonds Sample Spread 03-04by *spoonbard

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Manga (comics) / Pages & Panels

Here's the next spread (I'll be doing 4 spreads - or 8 pages - of this before I'm done with the samples).
Thanks for all the crits on the last spread, they really helped! I'll upload the new version of it when I'm done with this.

Once again, criticism is welcomed

I want these to be as good as possible, so whatever you can pick up (as small or as large a problem as you can see), will be helpful. We'll be using the spreads to pitch the collected volume to various publishers.

Once again, images by me, story and words by ~kandinsky-prince

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~teirrah1995 Mar 12, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

This is just brilliant! I really can't find any faults with it- it's just perfect. I always love your work. I find myself looking forward to Friday not because of the week-end, but of the update of Freakangels! Thank you!

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~CaptainOscillator Mar 19, 2007

the only flaws I could spot were in your triptych section. in the left panel it seems like she has a lazy eye and in the centre her reflection's hair doesn't fall in the same way as hers.
but aside from that this is a brilliant piece.

*spoonbard Mar 19, 2007 Professional General Artist

Ah, thanks! Didn't notice that

I can fix the lazy eye easily, but the hair will be a bitch. I'll leave it in and say it was intentional in order to highligh the fact that she sees the person in the mirror as different from herself *ahem*

~CaptainOscillator Mar 19, 2007

that's it. if anyone asks, say you were being artistic.
if any of my pictures turn out like shit, I always claim them as abstract. you can't argue with abstract.

~rasdiggle Feb 27, 2007

Great pacing & story thus far.

*spoonbard Mar 2, 2007 Professional General Artist

Thanks!!

~munds1984 Feb 21, 2007 Hobbyist Artist

enjoyable spread for sure, i like how the sequencing goes.

*spoonbard Feb 21, 2007 Professional General Artist

^_^ Thanks!

~tenshianna Feb 20, 2007

yup... i'm dead...

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