Kate and I finally got a chance to talk to our editor at tokyopop, this time in person! He gave us some suggestions regarding the character design, and a few story details, but other than that, liked the idea and is willing to push it forward! Exciting news for us These are my new character designs based on his suggestions. I tried to make them more bird-like, and less angelic, using the extra feathers, and also by trying to make his postures slightly awkward and like those of a bird. They came out a bit camp, but oh well, Enda's androgynous! XD
...had to copyright this one since it now matters a bit more.
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And this concept/design looks great - and I like what you did with the poses.