wow this looks amazing! There is so much detail but it doesn't look crowded at all, and the flow is beautiful (I love how you aren't relying on panels to divide them!). And the colours- wow! Love the night sky, the warm colors, everything!! *_*
Looking great! Always eager to see more. Have you considered posting as separate pages to make them more frequent, if smaller? Or do you prefer to keep them all together so that the art flows properly?
I always envisioned it working this way, so I'm loathe to change the format, although I think it'd probably make for a more exciting comic to follow if I updated a page a week instead of a page every few months. I'll definitely consider it.
I love all the little details and the color scheme, it nicely supports the atmosphere. The storyline is very easy to follow. Altogether this page looks carefully planned and properly executed. Good job!